Response

One aspect that Kozol examins is that when he was doing research or just watching the kids, they are more happy when they come to Ms. Hawkins class. She's also a teacher that does so much for them, because she bought a lot of supplies for them and just other supplies with her own money because the school was to poor or just took to long to buy the supplies for the students.

Analysis????? hehe

 What is analysis? How do I analyze an essay?
Analysis to me is somthing like going over a story or something you wrote.  And to analyze an essay is by going through the story and seeing whats it about and to find any mistakes that the writter has made.

Response to Question

Why did you decide to come to college?
The reason i decided to come to college is because my family wanted me too and that i  wanted to try and get a better education. I alwalys told my self that i was always going to go to college. To play football and plus to get a better education.

Evaluation over Task Two

What is the thesis for your paper?
The thesis for my paper was, all of her family had a good education , but my mother was one that didn't get to finish school.


List the main points you make in your paper.
My mother had to drop out of high school to help her mom take care of her grandma. She never really got the chance to finish it. Put her family first before her education.



What was the most helpful advice you received from your peer evaluation?
Just that I needed to explain on the times of the events that happened.


What was the most helpful information you received in class for your paper?
Just that i need to be sure i explain things correctly and accuratly.

How many drafts of this paper do you think you wrote and how/when did you write them? For example, did you compose at the keyboard, did you write lots of notes to yourself, did you pre-write or outline, did you write in small chunks of time or sit down and produce an entire draft at one sitting?
Only about two, and about 3 days ahead of the deadline, and i just did a little outline and free writed a couple sections.

What would you do differently with this paper to make it more effectively, or what did you try to do that you just don’t think you got a good handle on?
 Nothing really, but if i made more mistakes i'll take the time to correct them but im pretty comfortable with my paper.


What are most pleased with about this paper?
Just that i explained a little of my culture and that i talked about my mother.

Refecting and Interpreting: "Becoming Educated"

What I have learn from Barbara Jordan's early education was that she really had to work hard to keep up with here fellow class mates and school work. The decision that she made was that, she's basically working overtime on every thing she does. Staying up late at night, and studying harder and longer than anyone else. Basically, Barbara is just trying to work hard because its really tough trying to keep up in law school.