What is the thesis for your paper?
The thesis for my paper was, all of her family had a good education , but my mother was one that didn't get to finish school.
List the main points you make in your paper.
My mother had to drop out of high school to help her mom take care of her grandma. She never really got the chance to finish it. Put her family first before her education.
What was the most helpful advice you received from your peer evaluation?
Just that I needed to explain on the times of the events that happened.
What was the most helpful information you received in class for your paper?
Just that i need to be sure i explain things correctly and accuratly.
How many drafts of this paper do you think you wrote and how/when did you write them? For example, did you compose at the keyboard, did you write lots of notes to yourself, did you pre-write or outline, did you write in small chunks of time or sit down and produce an entire draft at one sitting?
Only about two, and about 3 days ahead of the deadline, and i just did a little outline and free writed a couple sections.
What would you do differently with this paper to make it more effectively, or what did you try to do that you just don’t think you got a good handle on?
Nothing really, but if i made more mistakes i'll take the time to correct them but im pretty comfortable with my paper.
What are most pleased with about this paper?
Just that i explained a little of my culture and that i talked about my mother.
HI Jay,
ReplyDeleteI'm happy with the detail you have included. It was interesting to hear about a different culture outside of the United States. Also, I find it interesting that your mom dropped out in order to care for her ailing relative. It is sad that she was not able to go back to achieve her diploma. Has this affected her in jobs she has held?
Ms. C